i just got a flash back to the life aquatic from this, I love the colorscheme and your perspective seems dead on, very nice details in the linework too, the one thing i don't get though is it looks like it's designed to be submersible but the bridge dosn't look sturdy enough for this, just my opinon though.
But it LOOKS like a sub, and surely enough, I think malaveldt intends on it looking like a sub. This design reminds me of those cool 'Incredible X-Sections' illustration books they had in the library at school...
There's something nice about its simplicity. But at the same time... it does appear a little too simple. In any case, it looks very 'real'... and looks very much like some form cargo ship (or any other 'labour vehicle'), and in the spirit of staying true to the essence of 'cargo ships' the design is seemingly 'unexciting' .
Goes to show how authentic it looks.
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"If you can balance a tack-hammer on your head, then you can head a balanced attack!" - The Sphinx, Mystery Men
Revenge of the first woman; cut the other woman in half! Cool. seems self explanitory to me except you have no airlocks. You gotta have airlocks in case one section floods. You are in violation of the safety code.
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I personally think we should take all the world leaders, put them in a bull-pit and let them fight to the death. Then the rest of us can go party.
A man who steals bread is desperate; a man who steals art is pond-scum.
Yeah, it's a spaceship but using space as some camp version of the ocean in a 1930s pulp kind of way. I ripped off Space Cruiser Yamato, generic 80s sci-fi and this machine I used to work with so I'd need a degree in semiotics to figure out what the hell is going on.
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